I really like the hooking question at the end. (:
I like how you have been researching
i like your facts and your pictures you just need a bibliography
It is very factful
this topic is very interesting! :)
Add some more information and tone down the background at the beginning.
Add more information and maybe some graphs.
this has short info but good info
I like that you had a good amount of information, you did a great job. But maybe make the pictures a bit bigger.
I really like the hooking question at the end. (:
ReplyDeleteI like how you have been researching
ReplyDeletei like your facts and your pictures you just need a bibliography
ReplyDeleteIt is very factful
ReplyDeletethis topic is very interesting! :)
ReplyDeleteAdd some more information and tone down the background at the beginning.
ReplyDeleteAdd more information and maybe some graphs.
ReplyDeletethis has short info but good info
ReplyDeleteI like that you had a good amount of information, you did a great job. But maybe make the pictures a bit bigger.
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