I really like your story about what did I do to deserve a sister like you said your ending that if you ever see someone having a heard.
1. I like how you gave evidence from the book!2. I like the dialog from the book that you gave.wish. I think you should put a little bit more Feeling in it >.<
Awesome job! You added proof, but maybe you can read with expression?
I like how you added lots of evidence and spoke very clearly
I like that you gave a lots of evidence to support your clam👍🏻
Great job Hanna!
I really like your story about what did I do to deserve a sister like you said your ending that if you ever see someone having a heard.
ReplyDelete1. I like how you gave evidence from the book!
ReplyDelete2. I like the dialog from the book that you gave.
wish. I think you should put a little bit more Feeling in it >.<
Awesome job! You added proof, but maybe you can read with expression?
ReplyDeleteI like how you added lots of evidence and spoke very clearly
ReplyDeleteI like that you gave a lots of evidence to support your clam👍🏻
ReplyDeleteGreat job Hanna!
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